You are planning a trip for you and a group of friends to a resort in a foreign country. Write a letter to the manager of the resort requesting more information. Your letter should include When you hope to be staying at the resort Ask for suggestions on activities to do Ask for advice on places to eat in both vegetarian and family-friendly places

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Dear

sir

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madam

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Madam

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, I have heard

alot

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a lot

of good things about your hotel from my

collegues

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colleagues

, so

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wanted to contact you regarding a trip that

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am planning for

upcoming

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the upcoming

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spring. I wanted to know all the amenities that you provide

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as airport pickup/drop-off, any relaxing activities that you recommend and the

dinning

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options, it was my understanding that there is a 3-star

mechilien

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Mechelen

chief in your resort and

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am quite

excitied

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excited

about that,

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was hoping to book 3 rooms for four days 23-march to 27-march, and

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request airport pick-up and

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will be waiting for your letter with all the activities that

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and my friends can do

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we are there. regards, krushang patel.

bhat.shweta17Tue Jan 28 2025

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coherence cohesion

Consider organizing your ideas into separate paragraphs, such as one for accommodation details and another for activities and dining options, to improve readability.

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Proofread your letter for minor spelling and grammar errors to enhance clarity and professionalism.

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The letter clearly states the purpose and includes specific details like dates and room requirements, showing a complete response.

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A respectful tone is maintained throughout the letter, suitable for a formal request to a hotel manager.

coherence cohesion

Including a greeting and closing adds polite and proper structure to the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

122 words

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