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The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
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pie charts the percentage of the UK who studying at
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university in one notation who have
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 to speak
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foreigns
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 their native language in one decade from 2000 to 2010.
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the British students prefer to speak Spinch only more than any different languages.
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 Spanish only was a third per cent
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 to 35 % in 2010 to reach the peak point in the pie chart .in the year 2010 and 200, two other languages , Germany remained at 10 % and 10 % respectively .
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 widely the percentage of no other language it was around double in 2000
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 the year 2010

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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