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The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
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The line graph provides key information about
propration
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the propration
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 of Australian products
four
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in four
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fore
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foreign
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 countries like Japan,
United
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the United
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 States and China as
wall
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well
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 as India.the units are measured in
percentage
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Overall
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,it is clear from the graph that the
percentage
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 of Australian
export
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exports
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 to
china
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China
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 was high.
In addition
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, there
dropped
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was a drop
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 markedly in
export
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exports
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 in Japan,
whereas
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 the
percentage
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 of Australian products in India was low.
According to
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 what is shown, the
percentage
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 of the products in India remained stable during the first two years almost 3%
while
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 in the middle of
2000
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2000,
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 it rose
about
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to about
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 15% in 2010
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and than
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than
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then
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 dropped to 7% in 2012. In
US
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the US
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 in 1990 the
percentage
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almost
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was almost
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 12%, it is a dramatic drop to 9% in 1995 In terms
of
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apply
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, China started at almost 2% between 1990 and 1995
than
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then
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 rose sharply to 30
started
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apply
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from 2000 to 2012.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Percentage
  • Exports
  • Trend analysis
  • Upward/downward trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Peak performance
  • Decline
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Inferred
  • Global events
  • Economic context
  • Reflect
  • Influence
  • Patterns
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