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You are going to move out of your apartment in a English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, •Let your landlord know that you will be leaving •Thank you landlord for his/her help •Tel him/her about your friend

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Dear Mr. Sharma, Hope you are doing well.
Objective
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 letter is to let you know that
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 month I applied visa
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 Australia.I got my visa recently, I'm planning to move out of the apartment as I'm going to my hometown first
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 I'll shift to Australia. I never expressed myself
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in front
 of you, but you always look after me like my brother.
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 I
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 in problem you
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 the first person to help me.
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I'm
 really lucky that
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 met you in
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 world. Thank you for everything. Actually, there is one more thing
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 want to talk about after my leave you are to rent the apartment again,I want to help you
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. One of my friends is moving to
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the city
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 for her studies and she is looking for
apartment
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an apartment
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 ,she is quite
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 and sensible girl. If you want any other information regarding
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anything
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 or even about her
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just let me know. your
sincerly
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sincerely
, Harshpinder
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task achievement
Try to ensure that sentences are grammatically correct and that you use the correct pronouns and verb tenses.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to have a clear separation of ideas in your paragraphs. This will help guide the reader through your letter more smoothly.
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Your expression of gratitude towards the landlord was heartfelt and effectively conveyed.
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The intent to help find a new tenant for the apartment demonstrates good consideration and responsibility.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • landlord
  • apartment
  • move out
  • kindness
  • assistance
  • gratitude
  • friend
  • potential tenant
  • suitable
  • rental terms
  • meeting
  • facilitate
  • closing
  • warm regards
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