You recently purchased an item from a local store, but you are not satisfies with your purchase. Write a letter to the manager of the store. In your letter •Describe the item you bought and why you need it •explain why you are not happy with it •say what you would like the manager to do Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

dear sir,

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letter to get some of your attention toward your inspection and delivery staff.

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have been

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to

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town recently

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my job transfer and

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rented a room but it is not furnished and

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decided to buy a

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and one of my

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recommended your store .

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week

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and my friend visited your store and

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selected

one king size

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and we checked the

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and

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it and

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said to staff to

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deliver

it to home . when

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got my delivery and

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was shocked because the

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not

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which we selected

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week and there

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some stains on the

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and the quality and size

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had selected and

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bad

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quality of

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matress

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, now

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am suffering from

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severe back pain .

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just like to put some light on

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the

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things that your staff might deliver the wrong

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and wrong

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address

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address

,

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would like to request you to pick up the

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previous

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previous

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and deliver the new

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that

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had selected and

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had

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tried to contact your store by phone call and

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did not get any response and

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just want to recommend you please check the order twice before delivering it thank you for your time.

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sincerely

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