The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below illustrates weekly consumption by age group of dairy products in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture illustrates the main meals and foods in 2 categories and 4
sub categories
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for the ages lower than 25 up to more than 65.
Firstly
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,
it is clear that
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for
the
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people
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who are between 26 to 65, the range of using
milk
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is fluctuating
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on
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approximately 1660 ml.
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, the percentage of
low fat
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low-fat
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milk
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reach
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its highest value, 80 per cent, for the adults who are 26 to 45.
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, it is obvious that they are using the lowest rate of
full fat
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milk
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.
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,
non
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none
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of
sub
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the
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groups of
milk
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, have a clear trend, but on the whole, the usage of
milk
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is
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experiencing
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experienced
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a rising trend over the ages. likely,
second
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the second
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set has
a
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same upgrading trend until 65, but after that, it shows a sudden
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downgrade
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for the elderly
people
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.
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, the
low fat
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low-fat
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and
full fat
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full-fat
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maximum and minimum usages
is
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for the second group of ages.
Similarly
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, no specific pattern can be found in the
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subcategories
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. To
sumup
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sum up
,
this
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table
is mentioning
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the range of two proteins usage versus the age of the
people
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. There is an upward line for both until 65,
how ever
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however
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, butter users are downgrading after 65.
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,
optimum
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the optimum
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values for each of them are for
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adult
people
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who
have
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are
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26 years old or
more
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older
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, milk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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