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The chart below shows the value of one country`s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country`s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows the value of one country`s
exports
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 in various categories between 2015 and 2016. And there is
table
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a table
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 shows the percentage change in each category of
exports
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 in 2016 compared with 2015.
Overall
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, the level of
country`s
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the country`s
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exports
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 in 2016 where higher than
2015
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in 2015
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According to
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 the above table of the product category, it shows the percentage change in values from 2015 - 2016, as follows:
Petroieum
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Petroleum
 products
was
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 3%, and
then
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 Engineered goods
was
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 8.5%, come after the Games and Jewellery
as
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was
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 5.18%, after that Agricultural
products
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product
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 was 0.81%, and the
last
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 one
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was Tex
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Tex tiles
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Textiles
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. The percentage of most of the country`s
exports
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 had
increaced
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increased
 as the table
shown
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shows
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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