The line graph shows value changes in the UK steel industry between 1970 and 2000, while the second line chart shows employment status in the same industry.

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diffrences

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differences

in the British steel industry from the year 1970 to 2000,

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the line chart compares the numbers of employees in the same industry.

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, it is evident that the

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of total demand and production followed the same trend, as they sharply decreased and remained stable later. Meanwhile, the import

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rose over the years. In

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terms of employment status, the figures underwent a dramatic fall throughout the period. In 1970, the total demand

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industry was

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its peak.

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, over the next 20

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it declined to nearly 100000 and remained relatively stable.

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, the price of production started at around 150000 but

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number saw a sharp decline, reaching less than 100000 in 1990 and it

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over the next period,

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, the

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of importation had a marked rise, shifting from almost 0 to roughly 75000. In

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terms of employment status, the number of workers was the highest at the beginning of the period, with nearly 50000 employees.

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, it saw a steady decline over the years until it became less than 200000 employees in 2000.