The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the
unemployment
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rates
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in the United Kingdom, Europe's regions and Japan over 14 years, from 1993 to 2007.
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, the
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percentages in the UK were high
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the beginning of the period but they decreased later which
exactly
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happened
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in the EU.
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Japan had the lowest
rate
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of
unemployment
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issue
then
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, its
rate
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increased but it was still less than the UK in the
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of the period. In 1993, the
unemployment
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rates
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in the rest of UE were 9
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they
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continuously increased until 1997 which reached about 11. After that, the
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continuously declined until became less than 8 in 2007. For the UK, in 1993, its
rate
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was the highest which was 11 but it significantly decreased until 2001 it became only 5 and
this
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rate
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stayed fixed for four years
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it saw a tiny increase. Throughout the period, Japan was the lowest country
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the
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rates
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. In 1993, its
rate
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was only 2.
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,
this
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rate
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became 3 by 1995.
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it did not see any move until 1999 when it saw a high increase which reached 6 in 2003. By 2007, it declined and became 4 which is the lowest one in the beginning and in the end.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words unemployment, rates, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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