The line graph provides information about the per house unit recycling percent in the UK, France and Germany from the year of 2005 until 2015.

The line graph provides information about the per house unit recycling percent in the UK, France and Germany from the year of 2005 until 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph provides information about the per house unit recycling percent in the UK, France and Germany from the year of 2005 until 2015.
The line graph gives data about the
per house
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unit recycling proportion in three European countries between 2005 and 2015.
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, throughout the years,
UK
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and Germany have
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an increase
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France has dropped until 2013 when it started to grow rapidly.
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and Germany,
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were the countries with the most significant
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. Both, have climbed to close
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%. They represented a
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growth until 2009. From 2009 to 2011, both increase
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15%. Since that year, it seems the
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is going up year to year finalising with around
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60% each
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. By 2005, recycling in France
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was
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50%, it
demostrated
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a reduction of around 20% until 2013 when it started to go up. From 2013, has been increasing the percentage, to finalize in 2015 in a 40%.

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