“You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone 10 live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.” Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear John, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I am just writing about the advertisement that I

had seen

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in an Australian magazine. As

,

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I have

an

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experience

of

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working in

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child

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care for six months, and since

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I became very close to minors, and

look

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after them. I personally believe that I am

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and caring person in the case of the

child

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.

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, in my

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work , each and every

child

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was

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with me , and loved to play games .

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, I can give you an email address of the owner of the

child

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care centre , where you can clear

your

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all kinds of doubts about my job. Well, in my leisure time, I plan to explore your Australian culture by visiting

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local sites , and historical places which

assist

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me

in enhances

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the

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knowledge about different

culture

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cultures

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as well. I can firmly say that I will connect your

child

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with me

and

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definitely he will

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delight in my company too. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the opportunity to discuss the qualifications

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, and just drop a line if you have any sort of question. Yours

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, Simran Aujla