The two given pie charts demonstrate
comparability
of Correct article usage
the comparability
variety
type renewable Correct article usage
the variety
energy
sources which are generated in France in two separate Use synonyms
years
(1995-2005).
At Use synonyms
the
first glance, it is patently evident thatCorrect article usage
apply
,
among range of Punctuation problem
apply
energy
Use synonyms
manufacture
Replace the word
manufacturers
have
different Correct subject-verb agreement
has
preference
. Fix the agreement mistake
preferences
in
both these Fix capitalization
In
Use synonyms
years
produce coal, gas, Punctuation problem
years,
Use synonyms
Petro
, nuclear and other. In terms of comparison, Use the right word
petroleum
exclude
Wrong verb form
excluding
Petro
, other production has been growing.
As can be clearly seen from the first pie chart, coal comparison with 29.80% and after 10 Use synonyms
years
Use synonyms
with
rose aroundChange preposition
apply
1
remained the most produced Punctuation problem
1,
energy
type in both Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, other Linking Words
energy
sources had the smallest proportion among all production Use synonyms
and
after on decade with the most growth, it Punctuation problem
, and
was
still remained Verb problem
apply
the
minimum significantly.
Change preposition
at the
On the other hand
, gas and Linking Words
Use synonyms
petro
in 1995 had the same proportion Correct your spelling
petroleum
approximately
29%. It was reported, 10 Punctuation problem
, approximately
years
later Use synonyms
gas
Punctuation problem
, gas
rise
slightly, Wrong verb form
rose
whereas
Linking Words
Use synonyms
petro
Correct your spelling
petroleum
generate
less than before Wrong verb form
generated
with
19.55%. Punctuation problem
, with
Furthermore
, nuclear Linking Words
energy
as same Use synonyms
as
other Change preposition
like
had
improved significantlyWrong verb form
forms, has