The line graph compares the population growth in India and China from 2000 and gives projections until 2050, based on data from the UN Population Division.

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shows contrast between India and China.

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we can see that

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in India

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2000 to

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trend

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2030

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China

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rising population

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China

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2000 to 2030 it

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experienced

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after

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that there is a slight drop.

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an upward population trend in India.

mahaalamri570

Aug 8, 2025

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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