The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 25 20 15 10 5 0 Food and drink Restaurant and Hotel Entertainment Under 30 31-45 46-60 61-75 76+ Citizens' expenditure in the UK

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 25 20 15 10 5 0 Food and drink Restaurant and Hotel Entertainment Under 30 31-45 46-60 61-75 76+ Citizens' expenditure in the UK

The bar chart illustrates how much money is spent

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different individuals from diverse age groups in 3

catagories

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categories

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, consumable items experienced a gradual increase throughout different ages from the youngest to the oldest people,

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the least amount spent

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was in hotels and

resturants

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restaurants

in contrast

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to entertainment, which was the highest in the same age group.

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with,

resturants

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restaurants

and hotels decreased gradually from well over 15% in ages under 30 to less

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then

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5% in the ages 61-75,

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increased to approximately 6% for people over 75. Food and drinks

soard

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soared

from being around 5% for inhabitants under 30 to considerably above 20% for the population above 76 years of age.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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116 words

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