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Writing Samples
Band 3.5

You and your relatives are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving, what type of rooms you would like, and ask them how much the weekend will cost. Also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.

Dear Ms. Nikki
from
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seaside hotel
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Seaside Hotel
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. Hope you
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are well
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well
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well,
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 Ms.Nikki
, my
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 vacation will start after two weeks, and
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 will be glad to arrange everything with you. I will arrive
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 the hotel on 5
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September ,and
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I'm
 leaving
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on
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20
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September. I'm looking for
single
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a single
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beadroom
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bedroom
 with sea view, including breakfast. As
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 mentioned, my vacation is for two
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weeks,
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 so
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i
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 would be happy if you
recommend
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could recommend
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for
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me
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some
interest
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 places and activities near
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the hotel. My pleasure, Maryam aladwani

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grammar
Fix date format and spelling for a polite letter. Use full dates like 5 September and 20 September.
content
Ask for the total price clearly, to know the cost of the stay.
content
Clear aim to book a room and ask for places to visit near the hotel
tone
Polite closing and friendly tone

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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