You recently hired a restaurant to host an office party at work, but there were several problems with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Give details of the food and services you ordered Describe the problems that occurred Explain what you want the restaurant to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my disappointment with the

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experience we had from your restaurant's food and staff, during my office party

yeasteday

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yesterday

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, as you know, I

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an annual

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party for my clients and

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, and for that I decided to hire your catering service at my workplace.

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, I had equipped a lunch buffet service for 40 people, which included not only a main course but

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a starter and a

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. Unfortunately, we did not receive the services as promised.

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, the food arrived late and cold, and

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, it was not sufficient for 40 people, and on top of that, your

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behaviour was rude too.

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, we had

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unpleasant experience, and some of my people

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me, did not enjoy the food.

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, I would like you to take

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seriously, because your restaurant has a very good reputation and take some preventive measures to avoid

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thing in the future. I wish you the best. Yours faithfully, Ketul Shah

ketulshah2825

Sep 20, 2025

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tone

Polite opening and closing.

content

The letter lists what was ordered and the problems clearly.

structure

Some use of ordering words shows how problems were arranged.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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