the line graph shows the value of australia's trade with china, the USA and Japan from 2002 to 2005 in AUD billion dollars. summerizing the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where relevant

the line graph shows the value of australia's trade with china, the USA and Japan from 2002 to 2005 in AUD billion dollars. summerizing the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the line graph shows the value of australia's trade with china, the USA and Japan from 2002 to 2005 in AUD billion dollars. summerizing the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison where relevant
The three-line chart
provide
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provides
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key information about the amount of Australia's global commercial with three distinct nations, in the years from 2002 to 2005. The units are measured in AUD
billion
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Overall
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, it is clear from the graphs that trade with the US had a stable rate,
whereas
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other countries showed fluctuating proportions.
According to
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what is shown, Australians preferred to use
Americans
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American
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products because the chart
offered
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showed
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that
since
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from
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2002
until
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to
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the end of the
period
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period,
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it had
a
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apply
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steady percentages in both export and import
with
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, with
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around 20 and 40
billion
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, respectively.
On the other hand
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, the remaining unions offered
unstable
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an unstable
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range. In 2002-export products accounted for 80
billion
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with China and Japan, but these figures
was
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were
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increasing with the latter by about 20
billion
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after 2005, before
dropped
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dropping
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at the end
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of the period. The import in
china
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China
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experienced a decline to 20
billion
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in 2005,
then
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jumped to more than 40
billion
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.
On the other hand
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,
import
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imports
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from Japan began with less than 40
billion
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,
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;
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however
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,
had
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they had
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a
little
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slight
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decline later.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".
Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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