The line graphs below show the production and demand for steel in million tonnes and the number of workers employed in the steel industry in the UK in 2010.

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steel in million tonnes in the United Kingdom in 2010.

Overall

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, throughout the year of 2010, the

amount

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of steel produced and the actual

demand

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fluctuated.

In addition

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, the

production

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was always higher than the actual order, except

at the end

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of the year when the

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declined, and the

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surpassed

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it. At the beginning of 2010, the extent of manufacturing nearly reached 5,000 million tonnes.

Then

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, it declined to 4,000 and remained stagnant until August. In August, the

production

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declined for a

while

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before rising to its highest

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, which was 5,000. Approaching the end of the year, the

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continued to decline until reaching its lowest point, which was less than 1,000, and was surpassed by the

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.

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for the

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, the

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fluctuated more than the

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. In early December, it declined to its lowest point before slowly

rose

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up to 2,000, and surpassed the

amount

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of steel being produced.