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Writing Samples
Band 8

Applying for a Job You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain in London, England. In your letter to Mr Sullivan: explain why you are writing describe your qualifications and experience explain how they can contact you

Dear Mr Sullivan, I am writing to apply for the position of Spanish Instructor, which was advertised in the April edition of Teaching Professional magazine. I am very interested in
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 opportunity at The Language Institute of Great Britain and would like to be considered for the role. I hold a Bachelor’s degree in Spanish Language and Literature and a teaching certification in foreign languages.
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, I have over five years of experience teaching Spanish to students of various age groups and proficiency levels, including beginners and advanced learners. I have previously worked at language schools and colleges, where I was responsible for lesson planning, classroom instruction, and student assessments. I am confident in using interactive teaching methods to create an engaging learning environment. I would be pleased to discuss my application
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 and can be contacted via email at [email protected] or by telephone at 416-903-2934. I am available for an interview at your convenience. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Jeevitha S

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task response
Add one or two lines that show what you have done and the good result, with a simple fact or number if you can.
coherence
Try to keep one idea in each paragraph. Break long thoughts into small parts.
task response
Name the school and role again, and say why you fit the job. This shows you know the post.
tone
Keep a formal and polite tone all through the letter.
content
Clear reason to write in the opening.
content
Good list of teaching work and methods.
structure
Clear contact details and how to reach you.
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