You received this from a bookshop. Dear Customer, We want to know your opinion about our shop. Are you satisfied with our selection of books and prices? What other services would you like us to offer ? Your sincerly , Bookshop Manager Task1.1Write a letter to your friend. Write about your fellings and suggest some imrovements 2 Write a letter to the manager. Write about your fellings and what you think the managememt should do to improve the services.

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Hiy Feruza I am going to tell about my
fellings
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and suggest some improvements . I recently bought several
books
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from a bookshop.
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Shop
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The shop
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was beautiful and comfortable
fir
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for
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buying .I enjoyed from
shop
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service
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because there were a lot of new
books
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comfortable
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and comfortable
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sits for reading . I was happy when I read a
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there . I think they add some rooms or sits for
mans
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men
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and
womens
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women
. If you want,
may
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you may
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go to that
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. Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter
for telling
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to tell
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my ideas and
service
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. Thank you for welcoming
when
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me when
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I went
in
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your
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last
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week .I was very glad because your
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was well and modern .
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,there are various facilities
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as
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service
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coffe
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coffee
,tea, wifi and soft
sits
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seats
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for sitting .
Furthemore
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Furthermore
, there was calm for reading. I believe that your
books
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are rare because I did not find need
book
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for me but your
shop
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found
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book
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.
Thats
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why ,these days, I always go to the
shop
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and enjoy reading
books
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.
Hovewer
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However
, I think that you must add new things
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as more
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sets
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,rooms,
bookshelvies
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bookshelves
,discounts,rents,modern
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, andmore
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andmore
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and more
services for everyone. If you add fast food ,
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it will
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be useful for
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a learners
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learners
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learner's
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book
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.
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is because
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some people may read to sit in the bookshop Your sincerly, Z. Shahzoda

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Task response
For task response, be clear on your goal. Say what you want to tell a friend and what you want the shop to do. Add one clear idea per paragraph.
Coherence and cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, group ideas. Use one idea per paragraph and link them with simple words like and, but, also. Keep the flow clear.
Tone
The letters are polite and kind.
Content
You give ideas on what to add or change in the shop.
The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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