The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs reveal the dependence of New Zealand on export products from Oceania and Asia between 1994 - 2004.

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, New Zealand required supplies from Australia with an average value of

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$5000 -

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$6000.

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, Japan's import product was two times lower and declined

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$2000. Both countries had significant peaks in 1996 and 2000.

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, if we take a look at

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, Australian suppliers had a fluctuating performance compared to Japan , and it rose dramatically in 2004 by

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$8000.

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the Nippon declined significantly in 2004 by over 4 times than its opponent.

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The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

now people complaint that they have difficulties getting enough sleep What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Nowadays university education is very expensive. Some people say that universities should reduce their fees, especially for the less fortunate stuvery spedents or those coming from rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people claim that it is justifiable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while others argue that it is unethical. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.