The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart provides data on the proportion of graduates from Brighton University, in terms of the diverse employment
sectors
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they work in the year 2019.
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, it is evident there were of teh essence differences in the numbers of business
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.
In particular
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, the largest amount of transactions was spent on the service industry,
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the least amount was spent on sports and charity. The service and manufacturing industries were the dominant employment
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as for transaction, accounting for 33% and 16.3%, each. It was followed by politics and government, and education made up a considerable proportion at just over 12% and 14%.
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, as for charity and sport, it was the least popular business sector compared to other occupations. Civil
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, science & technology, and transportation&warehousing were the only higher jobs, where expenditure on
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field was slightly higher, constituting 5.6%, 7.3% and 7.8%, in turn,
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other occupations made up the smaller proportion at 2.8%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sectors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • employment sectors
  • graduates
  • significant
  • percentage
  • trend
  • compare
  • most chosen
  • least popular
  • distribution
  • highlight
  • graduate destinations
  • notable
  • cohesive understanding
  • employment trends
  • pie chart
  • bar chart
  • overview
  • chosen career paths
  • sector popularity
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