You want to book a hotel that one of your friends recommended to you for a family holiday at the seaside. Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangements. In your letter, explain what accommodation you require and when you want to stay ask what will be included in the price enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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, I am writing to make a reservation at your hotel for my family holiday. I would prefer to book two double bedrooms as there will be four of us. I would appreciate it if the bedrooms

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large windows, so we can enjoy the outside view. We will check in on 24th March and check out on 31st March. I would like to know the price per room per day and the services included. Will breakfast be included in the price? We will arrive at the nearby airport, so will transportation be available? If yes, will I have to pay extra for the service? I would like to enquire about the places and activities near the hotel. Are there any adventure activities available nearby? I would

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prefer to know some interesting places to visit during our vacation.

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, are there any attractions? I look forward to your positive response. Yours faithfully, Rupinder Kaur

rupindersamrow222

Apr 14, 2026

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task response

For task response: You answer all parts, but you can add a bit more detail about the family and room needs.

task response

For task response: 'I would appreciate it if the bedrooms will have' should be 'had' or 'could have'. Check small grammar points.

coherence and cohesion

For coherence and cohesion: The letter is clear and easy to follow. You can link ideas with simple words like 'also', 'so', and 'because'.

coherence and cohesion

For coherence and cohesion: The last part has many questions together. You can group them in a smoother way.

task response

For task response: You cover room needs, dates, price, travel, and things to do near the hotel.

coherence and cohesion

For coherence and cohesion: Your letter has a clear start, middle, and end.

coherence and cohesion

For coherence and cohesion: Each paragraph has one main idea, so the letter is easy to read.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

159 words

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