The table below shows the total population and proportion of males and females aged 15 and aged 75 in the UK from 1911 to 2011.

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proportion

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and population of

males

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and

females

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aged 15

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75 in 1911, 1961, and 2011 in the UK.

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, as the

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of

people

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increased from the

beginning

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to

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of the period, the

percentage

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of

people

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aged 75 increased.

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the

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males

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increased steadily,

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proportion

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of

females

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decreased slightly in the end. The

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of children at the age of 15 decreased consistently from start to finish point, but the

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of male

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female teens showed almost the same result in

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period. Total population of

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in all age groups was 36.1 million in 1911

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the figure added an increase with exact 10

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people

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every 50

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until 2011. The

percentage

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of

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aged 75 was 0.23% in 1911, later

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percentage

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increased to 0.55% in in 1961,

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reaching 0.70% in 2011%. The

proportion

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males

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of males

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in 1911 was 34,100

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was less than

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females’

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the number of females

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(47,400).

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, in 1961, the gap between these later numbers was enormous (110000), yet

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gap was decreased by 70 000 millions of

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as

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in the

number

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of

females

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. With regard to teenagers at 15

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old,

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while

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of teenagers diminished by almost 0,63%

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given

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, there was not a significant drop in

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of

teenager

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teenage

males

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and

teenager

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teenage

females

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. In 1911, the

number

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of teen

males

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was 334,200, and

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number

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kept growing with approximately 10 000, ultimately

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354,400.

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, the

number

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of

females

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age

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15 was 335,700

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was

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higher than the

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of

males

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in 1911, but

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number

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decreased

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merely 2 000 in all

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, meaning that the

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of boys was

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higher

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in 2011.