The pie charts give information about the three various elements (carbohydrates, protein and fat) of three meal plans, namely an average diet, a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport. The pia chart comparisons the precentage of three alments on diets carbohydrates , protein and fat on three group of people eat Average diet, healthy diet and healthy diet for sport . Overall, The carbohydrates take the a high rate of ate in deit from the three group of people ,while the fat is the lowst rate . In, Healthy diet for sport it is the high score we prefer to eating carbohydrates 60% from total of ate than the portein 25% , the lowest rate is the fat 15% On the other hand the healthy diet with out sport berevered 50% for carb than protein for 30% and small amounts of fat 20% The average diet for normal people is take equale carbohydrates and protein around 80% from total of precentege and final the fat take the 20%.

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