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Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The average household expenditure in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

The pie chart illustrates comparison of average household expenditure between Japan and Malaysia in 2010. The main sectors for consideration consists of 5 categories including housing, transport, food, health care, other goods and services.
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Some people feel unsafe either staying at home or going out. What are the possible reasons for this? What can be done to address this issue?

Do you ever feel unsafe yourself when stay at home by your oune our walking? if you said yes you are one of 86 present people who often nervous about their self safety.
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In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

In today's world, publicy require more money for family for normal live. Due to big differance between successfully and just developed countreas, family income amount differance can be a huge. So family from second type of country have to work more and sometimes both parent need to work. And this family no choice.
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In a public-funded healthcare system, people who are willing to pay for the best and fast treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Individuals who can afford paying extra to a community funded healthcare system, should get a faster and better medical attention than others. I do not accord with this statement for various reasons and this essay will explain.
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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally . Discuss both sides and give your opinion .

controversy regarding the environmental problem is still ongoing on the industry. It is often argued that the environmental issue should be resolve on a global scale, whilst others disagree and think dealing within the nation is far better. This essay is going to examine the both side of the debate before reaching the conclusion.
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Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

only people who smoke suffer from many deadly diseases, but the people surround also get impacted from that smoke. This is the reason that many people say that smoking should be banned on public places. I am in compete accord with this statement and believe that if government is not able to persuade people to leave smoking habit then at least they should be prohibited on public places.
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Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the hosting nation. Others believe that these events are a large unjustifiable expense. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The contribution of sports is not hidden from human society . Some individuals claimed , there is a good chance to show the reputation of the country to other countries by hosting overseas sporting events . However , others argue that it is very dangerous to the financial and economical condition of that nation . I partially agree with this statement that it has both , benefits and disbenefits , for the hosting country
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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The importance of sports facilities on public health is debatable. Some people believe that a rise in the number of sports facilities will be crucial in improving the health of the public. While some debate, it would have little effect and one should look for different options for this. In my opinion, although there are upsides to having sports facilities, I think there are a lot of different things that can prove beneficial in improving the health of the public.
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Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?

In my opinion, I will agree that people in their twenties might not have sufficent work experience and
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In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

In recent years, the background of the house and building in some areas draws more and more interest from people who live in. This essay is going to find out some possible reasons and methods for searching building history.
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An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry. Why do you think it is the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, people are getting more inclined towards tourism and visit overseas destinations, consequently several nations are contructing their travelling attractions on large scale. This essay is in discussion of factors responsible for this development and also believe it is benefitial for economic aspects of nation.
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Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

Industrialization and the development of technology have made life easier, however, it has consequences such as pollution that is depleting the water and degrading the environment. One of the major concerns is water pollution which is alarming for the people who are protecting the environment. In this essay, I will discuss the main reason behind the pollution of rivers, lakes and seas and its adverse consequences on human and animal life.
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some people think money is the best gift to youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Now a days Many of us believing that Money was the best precious gift to the youngsters,However Few of them was disagree of that belief.
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Many elderly people are no long looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

The pie charts reveal the proportions in the meals that contain three types of nutrients, which are Sodium, Saturated fat, and Added sugar.
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today, more school leavers are unable to find jobs. discuss the causes of rising unemployment among young adults and suggest any solutions.

Education is the building block of a prosperous and growing society. Unfortunately, a large chunk of students leaves school without completing their primary education, which has a detrimental effect on their future endeavours. In this essay, I will elaborate on the possible causes and solutions of the rapidly increasing unemployment in older teens and young adults.
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In the modern world, people are no longer necessary to use food from animals or product from animals such as medicine and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are some people particularly animals lover who argued consuming more animal's pieces of stuff can lead to more killing of them. In contrast, some of them believe using different things such as food and clothes are able to balance the world cycle which is critical for our planet. In my opinion, both of the statements are factual and I will explain them in my upcoming body paragraph.
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International tourism is now more common than ever before.Some feel that this is a positive trend,while others do not.Discuss both views and state your opinion

IN THE RECENT TIME THE GROWTH OF TOURISM IS MUSHROOMING SHARPLY AS COMPARED TO THE PAST. MANY WOULD ARGUE THAT IT BRINGS A PLETHORA OF ADVANTAGES ,WHEREAS OTHERS THINK THE OPPOSITE. WHILE THESE POINTS WILL BE ELABORATED ON IN THE SUBSEQUENT PARAGRAPHS ALONG WITH MY OPINION.
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Some people believe that it is ok to put the needs of humans over environmental concerns. While others feel that protecting the environment should be prioritized. Discuss both views and what is your opinion?

Need of humans over the environment or vise-versa, has been a debatable topic over a century. To tackle this situation, environmentalists and anti-environmentalists have been using their voice to fight against what they feel is disadvantageous in their perspective.
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Many believe that retirement age is strict to 65 years old , which is unfair. To what extent you agree or disagree ?

One part of the society believes that there is no perfect age to retire and the restriction of 65 years needs to be lifted. I strongly agree with the above-mentioned statement, as maturity comes with experience. Firstly, we will discuss the reasons why this mandate needs to be abolished and secondly, we will explain how experienced class is an asset to the corporates, not the liability.
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One of the Consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that the lifespan of humans got dramatically increased due to better health care facilities. I consider this as an unnecessary burden on the government and its resources and opines that its drawbacks definitely outweigh the benefits. Firstly, we will discuss the negative impact of an uprise in life duration and secondly, we will explain how the cons outweigh the pros.
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