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It is as important to teach children to protect the environment as it is to teach them to read and write. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Children are the backbone of the society, and are known as future of the world. Ecosystem is one of the most hot topic considering the current senarios around the globe. Therefore, along with regular education methods, it is very important to impart knowledge to every childern about its important and preservation of the same. I totally agree with the statement. In this essay, I will be discussing it in more details.
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online shopping is a positive or negative development

According to number of individuals, the most efficient solution for the issue of overweight and unhealthy is the interference of parents. As parents is a crucial role and an example for children in which can influence their diets and food preferences, in particularly vegetable and fruits. When the habits of eating and enjoying healthy diets developed, children would grow up with no obesity and thus they would keep healthy for a long term. Moreover, except the the scientific diet, sport activity is also a resultful method for the young adults who are overweight. Consequently, the sport programs would ensure students boost their calories and getting sufficient exercise in which excluding the problems of children obesity.
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Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced?

Across global humanity has been facing with the impact of the changes in environment such as pollutued air, the dryness of land, and the lack of water supply. There are a number of causes of this, but certain measures could be taken to alleviate this problem.
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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many educators say a kids should be taught to play a musical tools. I do not think everyone children can play a musical instruments. Because, it can play by highly skill children. In my opinion, it should be intersted and learned from a youth. But, many educators say to teach a child to play a musical instruments. I think, this idea is wrong. I do not agree wiht this opinion. Because, everyone children should choose according to their interests.
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government will not provide the most innovative methods of treatment and it’s better to invest those funds in education and culture. What is your opinion?

There is currently a contentious argument among people over whether the government should afford health facilities for the public free or to invest in educational and cultural investigations. Personally, I agree that those government funds should be allocated to fulfil more and more modern methods of cure. The main reason why I support free medical service is, everyone in the society is not capable of taking good care of themselves because of their economical background. As a result , several times people ignore their illnesses, eventually this negligence may invite serious concerns. If authorities make this service free then everyone in society will be aware of their health conditions and consequently can contribute to build a strong and robust nation. Secondly , ministry collects budgets from taxations, which are paid by citizens. Therefore , it is their duty to provide basic necessities at no charge. Moreover ,
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Some educationalists say a child should be taught to play a musical instrument. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays playing musical instrument is developing day by day.In addition going to school more and more parents give their children to play musical instruments like a piano,guitar,violin and etc.
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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

In increasing world, high income is signification than getting satisfy. But some people prefer satisfaction than much money. I strongly believe that if we do not satisfy our job, we will have a regret in the end of living.
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Some people think the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this twenty-first century, I suggest that the schools must take more initiative on creating pupils with better employment skills and good basic skills as citizens compared to their personal advantages. By doing so, the nation receives a hardworking generation as well as wipes out the selfish mindset of the people.
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Task 2 Academic: Some people say that smart phones have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that smart phones have made life more complex and stressful.

Nowadays, with the development of high technologies, electronic devices become close to people and smartphone is one of them.
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Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture.

Few people around the world think having a unique official language internationally will bring more benefit, however, others think in a different way. This leads to difficulty in identifying countries and their culture. In my opinion, it is not advised to have a unique official language across the globe. Such things will bring more conflicts between people. In my essay, I will be sharing my thoughts on how this will bring conflicts and how we can avoid this for the future of the people.
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Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to their practices and customs. To what extend to you agree?

I am alway in top ten student since I was in grade five. I am not smartest kids in the school but I am very determined. I didn't have chance to attend any special class because of the family's budget. Therefore, I spent my time on library to read books and practice a lot of tests at night alone in my room because I would like to attend the Olympic camps in Thailand. When I was grade 11 I pass the test and attended Physic Olympic camp twice but I didn't reach the final rounds to the International camp. I was disappointed but this wasn't my end. I understand my capacities and passion. I have learnt to be more discipline and goal setting. I graduated my Bachelor's degree with honors and I have publish my research
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The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree?

Today it is difficult for common people to control the issue faced by the environment. Often, we debate that huge organizations or government bodies need to take necessary steps to control the damage. In my opinion, I strongly agree that it can be easily addressed by authorities by implementing and enforcing people to follow certain laws, likewise, organizations to bring new ideas in order to reduce or recycle waste.
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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high schoool programs.for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

approximately society conclude that social services considers being a mandatory part of high school programs.on the other hands, doing charity also improve the place where you live or adolescent have to reached with sports facilities.in my opinion I completely toagree these statement.
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Some people say that is important to keep your home your and workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

I think every person want to live and work in clean and soft room.If each people clean their room or office or workplace,they will live and work so bright and soft atmosphere.In my opinion,it is very important to keep home our home and workplace clean,we want to much work and we get ideas for make our companies success.In our country every man and woman try to keep their room clean.I read newspaper due to doing houseworks. In psychology keeping clean and tidy rooms make people to do more improve their brain system.They might be more knowledgeable and perspective.In my conclusion,be clean and soft is more useful for our health.We have been living in pandemic air since 2020 year,and we must be keep clean our environment,house and our workplace.
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Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame.  Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, many cities have been developing than rural places and many population only focus on urban area design of life than village reaction this movement brings more tackles among the country and village. In the essay discusses, what are the foundation and how might be solved in this problems.
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Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. Some people believe that they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people, however, say that they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both points of view and five your own opinion.

COHERENCE AND COHESION: 4.0 4 Structure your answers in logical paragraphs 9 Include an introduction and conclusion 6 Support main points with an explanation and then an example 4 Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately 9 Vary your linking phrases using synonyms LEXICAL RESOURCE: 5.0 7 Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms 5 Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes GRAMMATICAL RANGE: 5.0 9 Use a variety of complex and simple sentences 5 Check your writing for errors
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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of advertisements which try to persuade children to buy snacks, toys, and other goods. Parents often claim that these ads are unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

nowadays marketing through media either press or electronic is the backbone of enterprising. In some places, Children are being compelled by ads to purchase grazes, miniatures and other items, which is considered uneven by their parents. I would argue in the support of this idea along with reasons and examples.
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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

First of all, History is most important subject at school and at university. The people always choose Humanitary and Technology.
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Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The pie charts show the percentages of different types of books sold by the bookseller sold between 1972 and 2012.
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Some people say that music is good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I strongly agree with the statement. I believe that music can unify people from different sides of the globe and from all ages. To show that, nowadays, Korean Pop Music is popular globally and people from different countries follow this trend, even though they are not speak nor understand Korean languange at all. A community of a Korean Pop musician or usually called 'fandom' gather to support their favourite, although they came from a completely different background.
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