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IELTS Writing Samples Task 2
IELTS Writing Samples Band 1

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Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, many cities have been developing than rural places and many population only focus on urban area design of life than village reaction this movement brings more tackles among the country and village. In the essay discusses, what are the foundation and how might be solved in this problems.
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Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. Some people believe that they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people, however, say that they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both points of view and five your own opinion.

COHERENCE AND COHESION: 4.0 4 Structure your answers in logical paragraphs 9 Include an introduction and conclusion 6 Support main points with an explanation and then an example 4 Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately 9 Vary your linking phrases using synonyms LEXICAL RESOURCE: 5.0 7 Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms 5 Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes GRAMMATICAL RANGE: 5.0 9 Use a variety of complex and simple sentences 5 Check your writing for errors
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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of advertisements which try to persuade children to buy snacks, toys, and other goods. Parents often claim that these ads are unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

nowadays marketing through media either press or electronic is the backbone of enterprising. In some places, Children are being compelled by ads to purchase grazes, miniatures and other items, which is considered uneven by their parents. I would argue in the support of this idea along with reasons and examples.
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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

First of all, History is most important subject at school and at university. The people always choose Humanitary and Technology.
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Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The pie charts show the percentages of different types of books sold by the bookseller sold between 1972 and 2012.
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Some people say that music is good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I strongly agree with the statement. I believe that music can unify people from different sides of the globe and from all ages. To show that, nowadays, Korean Pop Music is popular globally and people from different countries follow this trend, even though they are not speak nor understand Korean languange at all. A community of a Korean Pop musician or usually called 'fandom' gather to support their favourite, although they came from a completely different background.
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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solution you may suggest?

These days internet is consumed by many people who use it uncontrolled. They share malicious information that can make many problems with logging into account however it is not a serious problem. Sometimes, people could complain that scammers hacked their personal data and it is huge problem. Personally, I reckon that it is serious problem so it is necessary to find a solution because people have never faced such kinds of issues.
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Some people believe that engaging in an active pastime does more to devolop childrens life skills than time spent reading

So i am totaly agree to this. For real if a hand full people spend her active pastime. The life skill is far superior to the skill spent on reading. Because in life skills the child becomes mentally and physically mature. In a mental skill a hand full people bored. Active spending teach to lots of childrens they remain to how can live their. There are many benefits for childrens Children can learn everything they need when they spend their time actively, all the time it has a big impact on their lives. For example, in active life, children grow physically and mentally, which means that they are mature and active in all aspects of life. In many cases, it is also inappropriate to leave children in active lives because they can oppose the state by misusing the Internet. Spending active time is not always right anyway
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In Malaysia, I completed my bachelor's degree in three and half years (a half year ahead of schedule) and my pre-university academic language enhancement programme in six months (one and a half years ahead of schedule), which allowing me to complete my master's degree on time or ahead of schedule. Even on holiday, I am committed to and involved in YTB programs and events.

In Malaysia, I completed my bachelor's degree in three and half years (a half year ahead of schedule) and my pre-university academic language enhancement programme in six months (one and a half years ahead of schedule), which allowing me to complete my master's degree on time or ahead of schedule. Even on holiday, I am committed to and involved in YTB programs and events.
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In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses, so people can choose to build houses in their own styles instead of building them with the same style as the old houses in the local area. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

A lot of city dwellers who tend to build new homes are direct the designer and constructor to give a little creativity which comes from them on their building seeing as each people has own version for dwelling and probably they do not prefer to build an old residence.
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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

Freedom is the key that allows performing all legal activities, this privilege can be used both in a negative or a positive way. However, some parents provide their children complete freedom and also buy them whatever they demand. This may raise a concern if this is a good way to raise a children.
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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement??

These days different governments are allocating large amounts of funds for different sectors, Governments are investing large amounts of funds on recreational activities such as music and theatre. It is agreed that the Government should invest this money to provide public services instead. Analysing the poor condition and education sector, as well as poverty level in the country will prove this.
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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, the debate on whether putting unpaid community service into the high school curriculum has been heated. As for as i am conceded, let the volunteer work be compulsory part of school programs can teach students care more about others and the society, which can benefit teenagers as well as creat a better characteristic.
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Some people argue that the government should spend money only on medical care and education but not on theatres or sport stadium.Do you agree or disagree?

Medical care and education is a necessary factor of daily life, but not only it could be helping in the health of a person. Health means being well on both physically and mentally. So in order to be active there must be entertainment.
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Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Many people would argue that it is easier to live a healthier lifestyle in the countryside, whereas others believe that you can have a healthy lifestyle living in big cities too. In my opinion, while cities can offer opportunities to live a healthy life; such as a variety of food choices and sports centres, rural areas offer cleaner air and possibilities to grow your own food.
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the proportion of female going into higher education in five various countries between 1980 and 2015.

Thank you for the e-mail! I am glad to hear from you. I'm sorry I couldn't answer earlier because I was busy with my exams.
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people who read for pleasure have better imagination and language skills than those who prefer watching tv to what extent do you agree or disagree.

People can advocate their lesiure time to improve their imagination and dream by many different activities. Many people think to vast imagination and imrove language skills people have to read in their free time. However, people who are watching tv , they waste their time. I disagree with this opinion.
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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days, the increasing number of mobiles and tablets have resulted in more use of digital newspapers and books. However some people still prefer to use the oldfashioned way. The question is whether in the future anyone will use printed books and newspaper or not.
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Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Why do you think this is happening? Is it a positive or negative development?

Acquiring as many different skills and as much knowledge as possible can help young adults to find their vocation.
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Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, while other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the Internet. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Degitilaztion is made the globe like a small village and every individual is getting information very fast campare to the past. It is thought by many public that it is vital to move to other land to know about them, whilst on the other hand some people consider that it is unnecessary to tour foriegn nations as the facts can be looked on television and by using cyberdata. This essay discusses both sides argument and at the end I will put my own perception.
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