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Scientific research should be the responsibility of government than commercial organizations . Do you agree or disagree .

Expecting a governing body to bear the brute of Research and Development compared to profit making establishments is a debatable one. I am inclined to disagree with this stance. I hope my essay with further illustrate my decision.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In life, Sometimes, it is very difficult to achieve our goals. Some people have the opinion that, if things do not goes according to ones expectation, the best way to deal with it is to accept the situation and move on. Whereas, others opine that it is better to keep on trying till they achieve their sense of accomplishment. This essay will discuss both sides of the view and express my perspective.
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Do you think that education and training should be completely free or it is better to require fully paid tuition? Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays there are a lot of courses and trainings. However some people assume that it should be, while another part of society consider that trainings and courses should require a payment. I prefer the first option and in this essay, I will outine both sides of this consideration.
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As computers and technology develop, they can be used to teach children and teachers won’t be necessary soon. Do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, everything is based on automation.Every day it is changing according to the needs of human beings.We are totally dependent on it.Computers are also the advent of machinery.Now everything is based on computers.Even computer and machinery development spark heated debate.Some people think that with the advancement of computers and technology children and teachers won't be necessary.But I am strongly against this view and there are numerous reasons.
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Interviews form the basic selecting criteria for most large companies. However, Interviews form the basic selecting criteria for most large companies. However, some people think that the interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The meeting is the principal for selecting the mass big firm. I agree with this statement the interview is a reliable method.
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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion the reason of growing overwight among people is people are not active and i completly agree with introduce more physical education lessons in the school plan.
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Throughout the history, male leaders always lead us to violence and conflict. If a society is governed by female leaders, it will be more peaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

In the Histroy of mankind ,there have been records of violence and conflict in the forms but some people think that if female leaders governed the society it would be peaceful.I disagree with this Statement we can get numerous example in Histroy when there have been voilence and conflicts in women rule . To start with , some people think that males are create more voilence and Conflicts due to they lead because in Histroy around ninety percent mens rule only ten percent women rule . For example, india late prime minister Indra Gandhi ruled time india in a war against Pakistan ,which resulted in the creation of Bangaldesh and former east Pakistan . Aftethat ,Jhansi rani bai did war with British army at jhansi fort. Moving further ,in the women that thing is most common like females are much polite ,understandable and lessaggresive.
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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree.

In this modern world, arts such as music and theatre are really important for entertainment and it is also raising the economy of a country. Music concerts and theatres are places for people to relax and there are many countries which made massive profits out of it. It has disagreed that governments must invest money in public services instead of arts. Calculating the loss on the profits that art contributes to the economy, as well as the decrease in the source of joy for people who love art will prove this.
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The way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. Has this become a positive or negative development?

I would like to apply for the position of advertised position, as experienced photographer at your photo studio. I should say I have been doing for about 3 years in a similar field. I am used to communicating with difference client. and my experience in 3 years, always I got it first degree in customer satisfaction. I would like you to have a look at my current set of work responsibilities: Understanding the customer’s request such as (speed, quality, variety, ....). use of the best equipment to capture. and the end, I Suggest poses to the participants, I think this item is very important. Thank you for considering and reviewing my job application. my resume in attach, share my qualifications and past work experience. I will look forward to having a detailed conversation at your soonest
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Multicultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. Do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary world, diversity is something that is preferred by each and every individual. Be it a religion, caste or weather, the choice of people is different.We all are the creations of god and the true definiton of almighty does not exist at all.Variety of public exist and among them , some are black , so the others are white. This ethnicty can give rise to many positive things for the nation.But unfortunately, today's generation do not understands this.They always prefer to reside with a mass having the same texture and common education sector.
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In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In mordern day, there are believers who believe in the age difference change between the parent and the children recently change in the world.Today, i will discuss with you guys about the two side to find the great solution to this situation.
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International travel is becoming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantage if increased tourists overweigh disadvantages?

An increasing number of tourists are choosing to travel in other countries nowadays come from the expense that use in a trip is become lower than before. From my point of view, these increasing number of toutists offer both advantages and disadvantages. In the following paragraphs, both of these views will be disscussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.
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Some people think city planners create more green spaces and plant tress. Others believe that they should focus on building new houses. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

On the one hand, it is often believe that creating more green spaces and growing trees in cities means higher quality. In other words, plants in these zone freshen up the ecosystem by absorbing carbon dioxide and other toxic chemicals as well as by reducing noise pollution. Moreover, having plenty of green space improves the quality of life in the metropolitan areas as for providing an opportunity to be close to nature for the residents.
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Many people decide on a career path early in thier lives and keep to it. This they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this review? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

In this modren era, most of the people are focus on their carrier when they are in early stage of life as a consequence to comfortable life. I completely agree with this given statement. In this eassy i will discuss given point of view with relevant ideas and examples
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Do you agree that obesity is increasing in some rich countries?

It is recent decade, in our society obesity is increasing rapidy mainly in rich countries. I completely agree with the given statement. In this eassy i will put foth the points in favour of my argument with suitable supporting statements.
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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant areas of city and towns, while others say housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, environmental problems are increased so planting trees is very crucial role for the environment. Some are of the opinion that trees should be planted in the empty space of urban area and town . Whereas, others are opinion that housing equipments should be constructed. I agree the viewpoint confidently. My preference is explained further.
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some people believe that parents should be responsible for encouraging their children to take regular exercise . others argue that the main responsibility for encouraging children to do so should lie with school . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

keeping the health of our body is crucial, for every people, no matter what their age even when they are still young as a child. Doing workout frequently aid us to maintain our wellness and health. Previous research was proven that people who regularly workout at least once a week look younger than the others who did not. Most of parents suggest their son or daughter to do exercise this is the initial action for the initiation of healthy lifestyle. In the other hand school influenced towards this action since they are provide the certain information in terms of theoretical resources and also emphasized how important excercise for accelerating our metabolism.
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Employers should focus on personal qualities over qualifications and experience when choosing someone for job. Yo what extent do you agree with this?

In my opinion about this I am not agree the solutions which are each workers have a lot quality than experience . Fresh graduate must have experience in internship. Although new fresh man did not a lot experience but in the working world must have experience likes internship or be winner to other competition. Workers need requirement like ability in expert ability. In my Solution to fresh graduate search and add alot experience. It is must difficult right? But if you do not have ability to entering worker world you do not get a job. Job seeker in Indonesia the first have qualification able to speak with english language.
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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In my opinion peoples with weight big is problems because peoples have weight big make heart disease. In the word heart disease cause foods which are have bad fat. And all peoples lazy to do exercise like fitness and running. Impact for this experience to get enough exercise have ideal body and get better healthy especially mature . Junk foods make a disease like heart, diabetes and weight gain body. In the contrast, have getting exercise and do not forget eat healty food. Such as vegetables and fruit it decrease disease health. Due to, in body healthy get soul strength.
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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant areas of city and towns, while others say housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Yes I am agree about planting treess. It is make fresh and clean air. Each area like downtown and village it is must to be planting by trees. Although , in downtown make planting it is dificult due to do not have a lot of area for planting. In the example like downtown Jakarta or a big city others in the world planting with water or earth it is so easy. You do not have a big area you just need place to planting. In village which is planting so very easy because you can find a lot of earth planting.
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