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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions.

Interpersonal skills, play a vital role in any business, and it is mandatory for all employees to excel in them. However, a few employers found that their recruits lack in carrying out these skills efficiently. This essay will discuss the main causes of lack of interpersonal skills are being nervous and feeling superior to others. This essay will also suggest possible solutions including socializing and treating everyone equally.
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More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicines should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, it has come to light that several people suffer from illnesses which have become resistant to drugs and these illnesses have been shown to be brought on by the kind of life they have chosen to live. Research has shown that few humans believe that returning to holistic medical practice will probably help in treating these illnesses, thus it should be encouraged. Alternative medicine is not new and is accepted that it pre-dates conventional medicine. It has its benefits and it is still used by many people all over the world. It should be known that I am convinced that it is harmful, and it has been proven to cure some ailments, thereby, I strongly recommend that conventional treatments should always be the go-to medium for treating every health challenge.
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Many efforts have been made by countries to address challenges concerning the environment but the situation have not improved. What are the possible reasons for environmental degradation? Are there any solution to combat this problem? Support your answers with specific reasons and example.

It has been argued by many that most of the countries of the world are facing problems of environmental pollution and are working hard to control it, but the situation is getting worse. In my opinion, I think that the main reasons include deforestation and increased combustion of petroleum products. This issue can be solved by increased plantation of trees and shifting to smoke free energy sources.
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Parents of obese children should be punished for making their children fat. Do you agree or disagree?

Overall, obesity is not the outcome of eating lots, but it is the outcome of consuming unprocessed food. I disagree, with the given statement which says parents are responsible for their kids being obese, as obesity is a disease, which can be there due to two reasons eating a lot of junk food and not exercising enough.
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Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?

Humans, being the only social animal on the earth, have a boon to think, plan and act logically. This skill is helpful to adapt to the changing times and thus survive satisfyingly. People finalising their career and working to achieve the same from their early years, exemplifies a person's ability to plan and work effectively to lead a successful life.
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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree? Give a reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is a general argument that people nowadays should be married before they reach the age of thirty as this is best both for their career and for the society. Personally, being engaged at that age is the suitable and perfect time for us to think about growing up our next generation.
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Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children, while others think it is the fault of the parent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Ever since fast food has come in the market sector, obesity among children rose drastically. According to some people, parents are responsible for obesity, others, however, believe that the government has a big impact on the rising obesity among children. In my view both are responsible.
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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that, since several centuries, the environment is in danger. Nowadays, some people think that the decrease in the number of some types of animals and plants is the main problem in that danger. While others believe that there are other things which can be more important environmental problems. In this essay I am going to discuss both sides and draw my personal conclusion.
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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we should find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from you knowledge or experience.

The temperature of planet earth has changed rapidly over the past hundred years or so and some argue that we should not spend our money and energy to fight it but find means to adapt to this change. This essay disagrees with this view due to several reasons as we shall see.
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People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays, the advancement of technology has allowed the society to travel and communicate easily in around the world. The community can improve their mental well-being and maintain better relationships effortlessly but there are also drawbacks to be taken into account.
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Some people think that large sporting international events could cause problems to the hosting country and it is not worth hosting such events. Do you agree or disagree.

There is a common myth that large sporting international events cause problems for the organisers and it is not worth hosting such events. In this essay, we will try to explore what are the advantages and disadvantages of hosting such events, and base our opinion on whether this myth is true if the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
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Rich Countries often give money to poor countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been seen that, the well off countries support the not so privileged countries by providing them support in monetary terms, but this form of support is unable to change the status quo of the countries at the receiving end. However, it is argued that this support should be extended in a form other than cash and this essay fully agrees that mere cash handouts to these nations will not uplift their economy and investment should be made directly in these countries.
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Nowadays, many students live with their families while others go to another city to study at a university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Today, large numbers of young adults choose to study at their local university while others prefer to go to another city. Although studying locally has some benefits, there are also some drawbacks that are worth considering. I, myself, had chosen the path to study abroad and enjoy the positive side of it.
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Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them while others think that there are better ways to demonstrate our care for these people. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people have an opinion about the importance of giving gifts and presents to relatives as a form of our care for them, while others disagree. I definitely agree with the opinion that there are better alternatives to do so.
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Some people think that living in a country for a period of time is needed to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A number of people advocates that staying in a country for some time is necessary to understand the local language and culture. Of course, there are some other ways to learn more vocabulary and lifestyle in a surface, however, to get deeply involved with it, is the best way to go, in my opinion.
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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of people believes that children should learn to compete, whereas many people oppose the view and according to them, working together is more important than competing for young generation, in order to be successful in life. In my opinion, pairing off and collaboration should be in harmony, that means, children's should know when to compete and where they should co-operate.
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It is better to have one true friend than all the acquaintances in the world. Do you agree or disagree with this statement

The benefits of having a supportive partner surpasses that of many associates in one's life. I quite agree that one loyal colleague gives the needed motivation and understanding than a good number of contacts.
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Some people believe that Arts (such as painting and music) do not improves people’ life and, therefore, government should not spent money on it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by a fraction of the masses that activities such as music and painting have added nil value in people’s standard of living and so the government should stop allocating their budget on it. I completely agree with this notion since there are other immediate projects which require significant funding and have a greater impact on people’s life.
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Some people say it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Although dressing is one of the most personal decisions of each person, yet many people judge the background of others based on their dress. In this essay, I will state the reasons why I believe that such judgment is justified.
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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not to build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

Due to increasing population, new shelters are required, but due to less availability of land, construction can only be done in the countryside. In my opinion, I agree that it is better to stop constructing homes there to save the environment around the countryside. However, I believe that they should be constructed in less populated areas.
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