The chart shows the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants
The pie charts illustrated
food
Correct article usage
the food
budget
ratio between dining out and home cooking the typical families spent in four different years from 1970 to 2000 with ten years gap. The ratio had grown progressively in favor
of dining out in that period of time.
The family had spent five times more on Change the spelling
favour
restaurant
meals
in 2000 than they did in 1970. In 2000, half of the budget
had been spent on restaurant
meals
while
only 10% were
spent on Correct subject-verb agreement
was
it
in 1970. Correct pronoun usage
them
While
the eating out budget
portion increased by 5% and 15% compared from
the previous decade in 1980 and 2000, respectively, the significant increasement happened in 1990. The Change preposition
to
budget
had raised by 20% from the previous decade.
While
the pie chart depicted the food
budget
comparison between dining out and eating at home, the line graph represented the number
of meals
per year
of dinning
out between the same period of time and the same 10 years gap. It specifically compared Correct your spelling
dining
between
the Change preposition
apply
number
of fast food
meals
eaten per year
and the number
of sit-down restaurant
meals
eaten per year
, as indicated by solid
line and segmented line, respectively. In 1970, the Add an article
a solid
the solid
number
was the same between of
fast Change preposition
apply
food
and of sit-down
Add an article
a sit-down
restaurant
, which was 40 Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
meals
eaten per year
. Both numbers increased steadily but the number
of fast food
meal per year
were always bigger from 1970 until the middle of 1980,
when both numbers became equal again. From that Remove the comma
apply
year
onward until 2000, the number
of sit-down restaurant
meals
had increased significantly and had never been surpassed by the number
of fast food
meals
which had been increasing also
but not that fast.Submitted by konikanimare825 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, budget, restaurant, meals, number, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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