The line graph shows the projected population growth of China and India. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the projected population growth of China and India. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
linegraph
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line graph
line graphs
illustrate
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the past, current and projected
population
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of the two
countries
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which are
China
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and
India
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between 1990 and 2050.
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, it can be clearly seen that there is
and
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an
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upward trend for
both
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countries
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. The dotted line
demonstrate
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the trend of
China
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while
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the solid line
demonstrate
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the
population
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of
India
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. In 1990, the
population
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of
India
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were about 0.85
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billions
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billion
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of
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people
whereas
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there was a huge
diffrent
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difference
different
from
China
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with more than 1.1
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billions
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billion
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of
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people. In the next years, the
population
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of
both
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China
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and
India
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increased
steady
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. In 2020, the inhabitants of
both
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the
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countries
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has
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had
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a small difference,
China
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were
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had
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1.4
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billions
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billion
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and
India
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were
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had
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1.3
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billions
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billion
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of people. The two lines describe the
population
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of
both
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the
countries
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intersect each other in 20330 which
remained
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that the
population
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will be the same
this
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year. It is projected that
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China
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China's
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population
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will start declining after 2030
while
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India
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will continue to increase and will reach
to
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1.6 million in 2050.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, countries, china, india, both, billions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected population growth
  • line graph
  • milestones
  • projections
  • plateau
  • decline
  • rate of growth
  • peak
  • surpass
  • crossover
  • period
  • trend analysis
  • comparative analysis
  • significantly
  • eventually
  • illustrates
  • specific period
  • trends
  • summarizes
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