Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. -How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

It can be a belief of

few people

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the few people

that medical and educational professionals have less value and are not well paid as compared to

film

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actors or corporate executives. I agree

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with

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opinion in regard of compensations,

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however as

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however, as

long the value is concerned, I believe Doctors and Teachers are much more valuable than

film

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actors. I will elaborate my view point as follow. In my opinion the value of teachers and Doctors is always much higher than the

film

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actors because teachers play a vital role in personality development of a person by educating him and to make him a useful literate part of the society.

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, Doctors are the equally important in our life, as they work day and night for our health and care and treat us in so many

emergency

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emergencies

and life threatening situations, whereas

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actors have importance for some people only just for

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the sake

of entertainment.

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to a very great extent or degree

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we can say that Doctors & Teachers are important to every person of

society but

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society, but

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actors are just an option for entertainment rather than necessity. As long the wages or returns are concerned, undoubtedly, the media celebrities or corporate executives are far ahead than teachers and doctors. Since

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making has become an industry and actors are paid by

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producers because these producers earn a lot by selling leisure time to its viewers and

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, they have very strong sponsors like multinational companies.

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company’s key management persons are being paid by rich business owners. Whereas the doctors and teachers in public

sector

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dependent on Government’s limited resources, so ultimately their earnings are not that much

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higher

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, some of medical and teaching professionals working in

private

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the private sector

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earn much better than those working in

public

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the public sector

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. In conclusion, I would say that

its

it is

it's

not logical to compare the Doctor or teachers with

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Industry or business workers as both groups belong to

very different

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a very different sector

the very different sector

very different sectors

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of life.

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Keeping in view the importance of doctors and teachers in society, Governments must allocate a handsome budget for medical and teaching professionals.