The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph provides information regarding why workers prefer to
work
from home and Add a missing verb
is listed
listed
Wrong verb form
lists
out
with main reasons-A,B,Change preposition
apply
C
; and the table illustrates the time spent by people weekly for Correct word choice
and C
work
in the period of 2019. The bar chart data's
were calculated in percentage; The table Change noun form
data
calibrated
into Add a missing verb
was calibrated
hours
/week.
Overall
, To save
money was the major Change the verb form
Saving
reason
for both male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
. And, Easier childcare was the Fix the agreement mistake
females
second
most reason
for female
, Fix the agreement mistake
females
whereas
males
shows an opposite trend and accounted very less in this
category.
To save money was the most important reason
for both men and females, brought up to 45%, 42
% respectively.
Moving to more productive, Correct word choice
and 42
Males
contribute almost more than two times than
females, having 24%, Correct quantifier usage
more than
11
% correspondingly.
There was Correct word choice
and 11
an
one more Remove the article
apply
reason
which was Easier childcare. In this
, there was a dramatically
difference seen between Change the adverb
dramatic
two
Correct article usage
the two
gender
, where Change to a plural noun
genders
female
was 26% and Add an article
the female
a female
males
was
just 4%.
Moving to the table, Change the verb form
were
Female
spend their time for Fix the agreement mistake
females
work
from home in
under 10 Change preposition
apply
hours
per week,,
having 74%; Change the punctuation
apply
in contrast
, Males
perform very less
Change the quantifier
fewer
hours
with the
proportion of 3%. Between 10 to 30 Correct article usage
a
hours
/week for both males
and females have a slight difference in hours
with 16% and 22% respectively. Over 30 hours
, Males
was working long hours
compare with all their hours
categoryChange to a genitive case
hour's
hours'
,
and accounted for 81%, but female in Remove the comma
apply
this
category work
for least Wrong verb form
worked
hours
with just 6%.Submitted by Pavansai Vemula on
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work, hours, reason, males with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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