The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the
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British
students
of an
university in England speaking Change the article
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languages
other than Engliah
in Correct your spelling
English
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the year
year
2000 and in 2010.
As we can see that majority of Fix the agreement mistake
years
students
speak at least one extra language
other than english
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English
while
some students
even speak two other languages
. In the year
20 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
students
were only using english
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English
whereas
in the year
2010
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,2010
this
percentage fell way down to 10%.
If we talk about year
2000, most of the Change the article
the year
students
were able to speak spanish
, which is about 30% followed by german and another Change the capitalization
Spanish
language
at 15%. But in 2010 Spanish speakers rose to 35% along with
another language
which experienced an increase of 5% while
German remained at 15%.
The students
speaking two other Correct quantifier usage
number of students
languages
also
increased about
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languages
like German and French both are at 10% in 2010 along with
students
speaking no other language
.
Overall
it can be concluded that as time is passing by students
are becoming more keen
to learn Replace the words
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languages
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