Some people feel that certain workers like nurses,doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. How far do you agree? What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

A number of people think that some low-level
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as nurses,
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and
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make money in small quantities by
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as opposed to other types of
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like
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or company bosses who are paid with big amount
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their work's degree is not so significant.
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, it is opined that the former types of
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are paid more than the latter. Even though I almost agree with the point, I believe that the latter sorts of
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important to live. In my view, the government must pay depending on the level of difficulty of working. There are various reasons why people think that
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and
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are paid more. One of them can be their role's
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to live. From my perspective, we cannot imagine our society without them and
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they help mankind to educate children mentally and spiritually. Another example
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is their difficulties which are undergone while working,
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, teaching something to children, in turn, requires some obstacles.
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, the latter types of
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have an enormous role in their own right.
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,
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give us spiritual rest via their performance and
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factor is considered
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integral for humans. There are a variety of methods
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to pay
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. One of them ,
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should pay attention to works' requirements and
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incomes without work wages. To commence with
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doctors
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and nurses. Sometimes they have to work more rather than set time and they do not get extra money for
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, company bosses and
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acquire their wage and
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different proceeds
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other ways. It is
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, they do not have to spend time on working, because, they have
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responsibilities as opposed to
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and
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. To conclude,
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company bosses and
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vital , they are paid in small quantities whereas,
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,
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and nurses should get more money. Because they have lots of responsibilities while working.

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