In some countries, there are some laws that ban employers from rejecting job applicants only because of their age. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Some people argue about not employing
third
-aged people. The paragraphs below will discuss the drawbacks and upsides of
this
phenomenon. On the one hand, there are some upsides to bear in mind when it comes to hiring elderlies to a company.
To begin
with, potential clients would tend to buy whatever service it is being offered, as elders convey the idea of being an experienced and acquainted person.
Therefore
, the enterprise incomes would improve.
Moreover
, taking from a personal point of view, giving them the opportunity of a new job could delay the development of some mental illnesses commonly diagnosed in old-aged ones,
such
as depression and dementia
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since idleness has been linked to it.
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, despite
of
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the age, being a multitasker person avoids getting sick.
On the other hand
, some people depart from
this
idea, claiming about a negative outcome, which is the
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to work.
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, the reduction of muscle mass is an inevitable consequence of
aging
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, which leads to
weakess
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as a result
. Because of
this
fact,
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routine could diminish over time these individuals' work quality, decreasing their capacity to maintain properly their demanded duties. To summarize,
although
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of views regarding
this
subject, both have their merits and demerits.
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