Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. How far do you agree? What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

It is often thought that the annual income that
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get is higher than doctors, and that made people
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believe that
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is unjust.
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will present a few ways to tackle it. Many individuals have the notion that superstars and managers should be paid less than
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such
as teachers and
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firemen
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.
However
, there are several reasons why
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exists
, and mostly they are purely economical.
Firstly
, the main reason why actors and
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management
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are generating a gigantic amount of money is
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they have
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a number of shares.
Thus
, the profits will be distributed among the shareholders.
Secondly
, if doctors increase their prices, no one will visit them, and
this
is because not everyone could afford to visit a doctor.
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specialist could cost $500.
Therefore
, there is a consensus among people that
this
problem should be reconsidered.
To begin
with, they come to an agreement that it is vital to create a new scheme that would bring justice.
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,
jobs
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based on how many lives
this
job could save and its impact.
For example
, many doctors put themselves at risk during the COVID-19 pandemic despite the fact that many of them went to the ER because of that.
Moreover
, a job like
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should have a higher income than a lawyer and an engineer, and
this
is because they have an important role in educating them.
For instance
, a teacher in Japan is generating a higher income than most of the
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society have
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, so it is crucial to come up with a new way to scheme. Given the above situation, I fear that one day students will not go to
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medical school, and
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them a living.
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