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Most employers do job interview before offering a position to a person. Do you think this is the best way to do this? What is the best method of choosing employees in your opinion?

Some owners do
job
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interview
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interviews
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 before
offerin
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offering
 a
a
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apply
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new
position
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 for a
job
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.
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do
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 not support
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 because it is not a factual
way
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 to
measure
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 people's
skills
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 and the most reliable
method
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 of selecting new employees is by giving an opportunity to develop several tasks related
in
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to
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 the area that a person
in
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is
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goint
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going
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Job
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interview
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 is not a reliable
method
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 to
select
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selecting
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 a person for a
position
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 because
this
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 does not reveal the real
skills
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 an individual
have
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 for a
position
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,
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method
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leave
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 behind many people who
has
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 great
skills
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 to work. More
important
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, if they
not
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 have great habilities for speaking, so they might get cero chances to get a
position
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, the
job
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interview
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 most of the
times
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 is a brief period of time that
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this
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does not
allowed
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allow
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to
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the
employeers
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employers
employees
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for
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other
skills
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. To explain
myself
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, many IT computer students in the United
states
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 are not great for communication
skills
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, but they have
reallly
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really
 amazing habilities for
cyber crime
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cybercrime
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. As a
reult
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result
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this
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 clever professionals might suffer from getting into a
job
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 because of
lack
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a lack
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 of communication. The best
method
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 for selecting new employees is by offering
the
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them the
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 opportunity to work in the field they are going to apply their
skills
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, so the supervisor can
measure
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 their abilities
on
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 practice.
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way
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 to prove real
knowlledge
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knowledge
 in which new workers can prove their really
habilities
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abilities
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 for that
position
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.
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,
this
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way
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 is possible to
measure
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 the experience as well as the knowledge for
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position
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, In
Virginia
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the
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apply
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Google company hire people who prove
them
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apply
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they can break down their internet system.
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,
this
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way
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, the real
skills
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 are proved without
needed
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needing
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 to
past
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pass
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 any oral
interview
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. To conclude, the most reliable
way
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 to hire
a
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apply
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new
wmployees
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employees
employee
 is by giving them the opportunity to prove their
skills
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on
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in
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 the real field, so
this
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way
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 a wide test is performed and the
employeer
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employer
employee
 can really
measure
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 the knowledge. With
this
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, it is a more fair
way
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 to give
job
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 opportunities to anyone.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • interview
  • employer
  • candidate
  • position
  • skills
  • personality
  • culture
  • structured
  • consistent
  • fairer
  • abilities
  • tests
  • reference
  • insights
  • performance
  • job
  • method
  • choose
  • select
  • process
  • true
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