Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. Do you agree?

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should provide a significant value on

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acquiring a higher position because it is usually dominated by men, even though

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of the staff are

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mostly in richer countries.

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essay agrees with the statement mentioned above because

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equality and some bigger achievement belongs to

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. As a species, we tend to think that the male invades the world

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being

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dominant, but people should believe in equality because

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can perform well in the said position.

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is to say that

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are capable of performing what the opposite gender can do including in

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corporate world

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in terms of

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, the late former President Cory Aquino,

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female president of the Philippines, as she

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for her country during the 20 years

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can see in her interviews the dedication and

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strong power of being

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.

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are certain qualities that

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excell

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excel

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means that mostly bigger achievements are ruled by

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like in university, a significant fact is documented that

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are the

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who

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in class including sports

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and other

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extra curricular

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activities.

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, recent survey data that 80% of the graduates with

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in most

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in Victoria town

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,

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they are much prepared for bigger things. In conclusion,

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should

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have a seat for

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position because of non-discrimination and huge

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mostly by

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.