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The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
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The pie charts indicate the percentages of English students at a University in Britain. who were
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 to
other language
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another language
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in addition
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 to English in 2000 and 2010
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overall
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, about half
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 of the students didn't speak
other language
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another language
other languages
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 over the period.
To begin
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 with, learners in the university, who just speak
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 tongue English decreased steadily from 50% to 45% over ten years.
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, people who just speak German stayed
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remind
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 10%,
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 there was
a
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 increase gradually in both
of
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French and Tow other languages by 5
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per cent
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 over a decade.
On the other hand
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, there
was
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were
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 disappear completely for people who speak another language in 2010.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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