You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: say what experience you have ask what the work involves enquire about conditions Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to enquire about a part-time job for three months over the summer, which was advertised

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of all, I completed my bachelor's in Hospitality Management in 2018 from Charles Sturt Institute and since

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, I am working with Pullman Hotel as an assistant manager.

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, I have over 4 years of experience. I started work at Pullman as a waiter and I was soon promoted to assistant manager within 1 year.

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I could not find any information about the role.

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, could you elaborate a bit more about the role? And, what duties I will suppose to carry out?

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, it is a common trend in the hospitality industry that their staff work for them only.

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, are there any hidden conditions that I need to be aware of in order to carry out my job in an efficient manner? So as, are there any restrictions within the premises that I should know about as well? I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Aneel Karmani

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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