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You are planning a trip for you and a group of friends to a resort in a foreign country. Write a letter to the manager of the resort requesting more information. Your letter should include When you hope to be staying at the resort Ask for suggestions on activities to do Ask for advice on places to eat for both vegetarian and family friendly places

#trip #group #friends #resort #country #manager #information #hope #suggestions #activities #advice #places
Hello Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to you because me and my friends planning a trip to
Maxico
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Mexico
 and during the time of
vacation
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,vacation
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 we want to stay at your hotel from 5th May
,
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apply
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 2023 to 12th May
,
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 2023. I want some piece of information regarding the resort. According to the planning of the trip, we are arriving in the morning at 6 am
on
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Maxico
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Mexico
 airport. I want to know
,
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if you could arrange
ride
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a ride
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 for seven people.
Moreover
, it would be great if you could provide me
the
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activiteis
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activities
 which we can do during
trip
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the trip
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. Former information
regading
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regarding
 activities will help us to pack the things according to them and plan them
accordingly
. Other than
this
 , I
also
 want to know about some places
those
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 are
family friendly
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 and can get vegetarian food to eat. It will be great if you give your beneficial advice on the
expences
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expenses
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also
. I will be very thankful to you. Looking forward
for
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 your response. Thank you very much Regards, Manpreet
Submitted by manpreetksidhu1944 on

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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