The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

It is recommended by the world health organization to eat at least five portions of vegetables and fruit each day. The graph illustrates the percentage of people from

UK

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these portions in 2006.

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, it can be seen that data are reported by age group and gender.

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from 55 to 64 years old achieved the highest percentage on the chart.

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, the lowest one is represented by young males from 19 to 24 years old, at 15%. One of the main features is that male adults from 35 to 44 and between 45 to 54 years old

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both for slightly more than 20%. Another main

features

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is that the

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percentage

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of

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increased

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15% to 35% until they are 64,

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decrease to 25%. The

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by males

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quite similar and it is clear if we look

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the

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four groups of bars which, in order

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for 15%, 20% and almost 25% for the

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two.