The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group
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The chart illustrates the
percentage
of men
and women
who consume five or more portions of fruit and vegetables per day according to
their age
in 2006. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that the highest percentages were men
and women
who are in the age
group
between 55 to 64.
First of all, the percentage
of females between 19 to 24 years was slightly more than 15%. After that, the percentage
of males reached exactly 15%. Next,
the percentages of the males and females age
group
of 25 to 34 were 20% and 22%, respectively. According to
people who are in the age
group
of 35-44, the ratio of women
was 25%, while
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men
reached higher than 20%. The 45-54 age
group
of men
stood at the same percentage
. On the other hand
, the women
's percentage
increased reaching almost 30%.
Following that, the ratio of women
kept rising until remaining constant at 35%. The men
's ratio was near
35%.
By far, the Change the word
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age
group
of 65 to 74 in males and females were similar. The percentage
of men
was 27% and the percentage
of women
was 30%. Lastly
, the percentages of the age
group
of 75 in men
and women
were the same which is 25%.Submitted by malak.ayman1 on
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