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The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The bar graph gives information about the portions of
males
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 and
females
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 who eat five portions of
fruits
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 and
vegetables
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 every day. The figures were collected in the UK in the year 2006.
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, those who are 55-64
years
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 old consumed the most
fruits
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 and
vegetables
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 during the study period.
Whereas
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 those aged 19-24 ate the least. In detail, 19-24 male consumers ate about 15% of
fruits
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 and
vegetables
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 in a day.
Although
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 there is a minimal increase, boys in 25-54
years
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 old have a steady pattern of not more than 25%. A significant increase in trend as the
age
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 goes high as 55-64
years
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 with a proportion of roughly 30-35% which is more than half of those who are 19-24
years
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 old.
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, as the
age
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 goes older
males
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, the lower of consumption of
fruits
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 and
vegetables
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 each day. At 75
years
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 old, only 25% of daily
fruits
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 and
vegetables
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 is eaten which is almost a 10% difference as compared with 55-64
years
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 old. Taking a closer look at
females
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, with a consistent increase in consumption of healthy foods starting at about 15% for 19-24
years
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 old. The highest consumer of
fruits
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 and
vegetables
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 in girls are those who are 55-64 at not more than 35% which is the same
age
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 group of people in
males
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.
Similarly
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, a downward pattern is observed for
females
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 as they
age
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 older. At 75
years
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,
females
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 got to include their
fruits
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 and
vegetables
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 in their meals on a daily basis for 25% which is the same difference in percentage in
males
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 of 10%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words males, females, fruits, vegetables, years, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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