The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
The bar graph gives information about the portions of
males
and
females
who eat five portions of
fruits
and
vegetables
every day. The figures were collected in the UK in the year 2006.
Overall
, those who are 55-64
years
old consumed the most
fruits
and
vegetables
during the study period.
Whereas
those aged 19-24 ate the least. In detail, 19-24 male consumers ate about 15% of
fruits
and
vegetables
in a day.
Although
there is a minimal increase, boys in 25-54
years
old have a steady pattern of not more than 25%. A significant increase in trend as the
age
goes high as 55-64
years
with a proportion of roughly 30-35% which is more than half of those who are 19-24
years
old.
However
, as the
age
goes older
males
, the lower of consumption of
fruits
and
vegetables
each day. At 75
years
old, only 25% of daily
fruits
and
vegetables
is eaten which is almost a 10% difference as compared with 55-64
years
old. Taking a closer look at
females
, with a consistent increase in consumption of healthy foods starting at about 15% for 19-24
years
old. The highest consumer of
fruits
and
vegetables
in girls are those who are 55-64 at not more than 35% which is the same
age
group of people in
males
.
Similarly
, a downward pattern is observed for
females
as they
age
older. At 75
years
,
females
got to include their
fruits
and
vegetables
in their meals on a daily basis for 25% which is the same difference in percentage in
males
of 10%.
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