The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The two pie charts compare what and how many languages English students spoke at a university located in England between the years 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, Spanish
being
the most commonly spoken one in both years. Wrong verb form
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On the contrary
, the least spoken was the German language
. It can be seen obviously from the charts that student
who Fix the agreement mistake
students
spoken
only Wrong verb form
spoke
Spanish
in both 2000 and 2010 comprising
the highest percentage of 30% and 35%, respectively. In 2000, the proportion of Wrong verb form
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people
Spanish
was two times higher than France-the
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France
language
that was just making up 15% at this
time. Then
, the number of student
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students
Spanish
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increase
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increasing by
reach
35% in the year 2010. Wrong verb form
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It was
also
evident that,
German was the Remove the comma
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language
that was most seldom used at this
university. Students speaking German stabilised at 10% over the period shown, which was three times lower than those who use Spanish
. Besides
, with an increase to 20% from 15% in 2000, those who spoke another language
became the second largest group in the year 2010.Submitted by Minh Ngoc
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