the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.

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The given pie charts compare the ability of British students at one university in England to communicate in several languages

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.

Some people say that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this.

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The government should sometimes infringe on peoples' freedom for the security of society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People today spend less and less time interacting with other people in their neighborhood and this has a negative impact on community. What are the causes and solutions? by