The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Those two line graphs illustrate the statistic of things, brought from
Australia
and Japan to New Zealand between 1994 and 2004. Units are measured in NZ million.
Overall
, there was a big difference in the import to New Zealand from
Australia
between the years, but the rate was increasing steadily.
On the other hand
, a report from Japan shows that the level decreased with time and it is seen that it is lower in comparison with the rates from
Australia
. The beginning of the graph for
Australia
was from the year 1994 and it started with the lowest point for all years (about 4000). In the next few
years
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there is a slight rise (between 5000 and 6000) and
then
in ,
1999
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there was a big drop (3000). With few more ups and ,downs the final score in 2004 was 8000, showing growth and higher results. Japan started the graph with 3000 in 1994, followed by increases (above 6000 in 1996 and exactly 6000 in 2000) and a fall between them in 1999 (almost the same as the data from
Australia
). The lowest point was in 2004 (2000), showing a decrease in the
overall
picture.
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  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
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