The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The following illustration depicts the
percentage
of two sexes in UK
that daily consume five or more portions of Correct article usage
the UK
fruits
and vegetables
in 2006. There are 7 seven age
groups of people
illustrated on the bar chart.
Overall
, we observe that the highest amount of fruits
and vegetables
have been eaten by females. Also
, the least amount of plant-based food are
consumed by Change the verb form
is
people
that are aged 19-24. And the highest percentage
have
been eaten by English Change the verb form
has
people
that are aged 55-64. Due to
this
reason, we can see upward
trend between Add an article
an upward
two
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the two
age
groups, which are 19-24 and 55-64, and after slight
decrease in percentages of consumed fruit and Add an article
a slight
vegetables
.
Young people
that were 19-24, ate about 15% each. Female
consumed slightly more Fix the agreement mistake
Females
fruits
and vegetables
than males. We observe slight
decrease in the next Add an article
a slight
age
group which is 25-34. Men ate 20% and women almost a quarter. People
that are 35-44 years old ate even more percentage
of plants, which was almost a quarter in males diet
and exactly 25% in females diet
. Females that are aged 45-54 ate more that
25% of Correct word choice
than
fruits
and vegetables
, but males' percentage
remained constant. Both genders reached a peak of consuming more plant based
food at the Add a hyphen
plant-based
age
of 55-64. Fruits
and vegetables
made up about 35% of the diet
of middle aged
women. And men ate almost 30% of the same Add a hyphen
middle-aged
diet
.
After we can observe downward
trendCorrect article usage
a downward
,
because both genders started eating less Remove the comma
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
plant based
food when they got older. Add a hyphen
plant-based
Female
that Add an article
A female
The female
are
aged 65-74 ate about 30% of fruit and Change the verb form
is
vegeatables
, and men ate almost 30%. English Correct your spelling
vegetables
people
that are aged 75 ate the same amount of fruit and vegetables
which was 25%.Submitted by Ayan on
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