The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

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of two sexes in

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that daily consume five or more portions of

fruits

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and

vegetables

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in 2006. There are 7 seven

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groups of

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illustrated on the bar chart.

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, we observe that the highest amount of

fruits

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and

vegetables

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have been eaten by females.

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, the least amount of plant-based food

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consumed by

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that are aged 19-24. And the highest

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have

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been eaten by English

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that are aged 55-64.

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reason, we can see

upward

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trend between

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the two

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age

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groups, which are 19-24 and 55-64, and after

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decrease in percentages of consumed fruit and

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. Young

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that were 19-24, ate about 15% each.

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consumed slightly more

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and

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than males. We observe

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decrease in the next

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group which is 25-34. Men ate 20% and women almost a quarter.

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that are 35-44 years old ate even more

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of plants, which was almost a quarter in males

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and exactly 25% in females

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. Females that are aged 45-54 ate more

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25% of

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and

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, but males'

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remained constant. Both genders reached a peak of consuming more

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food at the

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of 55-64.

Fruits

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and

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made up about 35% of the

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of

middle aged

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women. And men ate almost 30% of the same

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. After we can observe

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a downward

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trend

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because both genders started eating less

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plant based

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food when they got older.

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that

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aged 65-74 ate about 30% of fruit and

vegeatables

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, and men ate almost 30%. English

people

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that are aged 75 ate the same amount of fruit and

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which was 25%.